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2020年雅思寫作高分備考指南

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  雅思考試前,不管水平怎么樣,進行雅思備考是考到好分數的基礎,那么下面就和出國留學網的小編一起來看看2020年雅思寫作高分備考指南。

  我們先來看這樣一道雅思題目:

  Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?

  很多同學拿到手第一時間就會用本能反應做出選擇。老人家當然應該在家里由子女自己來照顧,怎么能夠送老人院呢?然后,就開始迫切地寫作文。然而寫著寫著,可能會發現要么論據不夠充分,寫到一半無話可些,要么某些想法在用英文表達時,遇到太多的障礙。

  審題的過程應拆解為如下4步:

  1.讀題意

  2.辨題型

  3.列提綱

  4.選立場

  1、讀題意

  這一步相對比較簡單,雅思寫作題干通常不會有復雜的長難句,只要大家認識所有的單詞即可。當然如果遇到生詞,也有兩個方法可以解決。

  一是借助上下文猜。如下面這道題目:Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? 其中的第一個單詞disruptive可能就有同學不認識,不知道精確意思。但是后文中的students who are "noisy and disobedient"的同義解釋,不難讓大家得出"吵鬧的,不守規矩的"這樣的意思。

  二是通讀機經,掃除生詞。因為,不見得所有的生詞都能夠猜得了。有時題目中出現"censorship"(審查制度) 、"anti-social behavior"(反社會行為)、"juvenile delinquency"(青少年犯罪)這樣含義比較專業的生詞,考生們基本是無法根據上下文推出精確意思的,比較好的解決方法就是通讀機經。

  2.辨題型

  所謂題型,實際就是題目最后半句話的寫作指令,寫作要求。不同題型,寫作要求不同,邏輯步驟不同,段落結構不同,也會直接影響下一步的列提綱工作需要做的操作。

  雅思考試的大作文通常分為五種題型,每種題目的出題形式都有非常明確的標志。下面為大家列舉的是每種不同題型的示例,大家留意后面的粗體字寫作指令即可。

  同意與否

  Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree?

  Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not eliminate the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  雙邊討論

  Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media, while others argue that it will hinder information freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

  Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion。

  利弊分析

  Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at a primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

  問題解決

  Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

  綜合提問

  As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

  Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this case? Is it a positive development?

  3.列提綱

  說起來簡單,所謂的列提綱,無非就是想題目需要的論據進行羅列,包括:同意或反對某個觀點的理由,事物的優缺點,問題的原因、后果、解決方案等等。但是實際上不同的話題,難度不同,我們能夠列出有效論據的難度也不同。就算是簡單的題目,依然要經歷一個"想"和"篩選"的階段。

  讓我們回到剛才的例題,來做一個示范:

  Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?

  首先,"想"就是我們所說的brainstorming的過程?;趯︻}目的正確理解,考生可以先將話題的兩個對立面的優缺點都盡量地詳細思考分析一番,而并不要只是執著地去想自己的先入為主或者本能選擇的"在家照顧父母"的好處。這樣,可以讓自己后面的決定更加客觀,讓理智而非情感來決定我們的立場。當然這道題目本身不難,所以,相信大部分考生都能夠想到下面的這些觀點。

  可以用下面的表格來做一個雙方論據比較。

  At home VS nursing house

  1. 與家人的情感交流,歸屬感1. 與其他老人(同齡人/朋友)的交流

  2. 方便、貼心的照顧2. 專業的照顧,醫療(避免意外)

  3. 傳統,盡孝道,責任,義務,3. 適應社會發展趨勢

  4. 分擔家務,帶孩子4. 豐富多彩的活動

  5. 省錢(服務好的老人院比較昂貴)5. 省心(不必擔心父母)

  應該說,這樣的一個提綱,正反兩邊論據一一對應,無論選擇任何一邊作為立場,都會有充分的內容可以發揮。但是,在考生真正動筆寫之前,一定要先思考一個問題,那就是,這些內容用英文會不會有表達不了的?無論是詞匯上的障礙,還是表達清晰度的困難?

  所以,接下來的篩選工作就很重要了??忌纯醋约核氲降膬热莓斨杏袥]有被迫要從文章當中去掉的觀點。

  包括:

  缺少詞匯支持的

  難以表達清楚的

  論證力度較弱的

  缺少詞匯支持的

  從詞匯上來分析,我們需要用到的有一定難度的詞組主要有:family bound(家庭歸屬感), professional medical service(專業的醫療服務),social trends(社會趨勢),fulfill one's filial duty(盡孝道),responsibility and obligation(責任和義務)。

  而這當中對于大家最困難的,莫過于要表達類似"在中國子女們都會選擇自己照顧父母,因為孝順父母、盡孝道是歷來的傳統,是子女的責任和義務"的觀點。當然,就算不認識以上詞組,聰明的同學也會想到用paraphrase的方法盡量表達自己的意思,但是詞匯上必然有遜色,更何況更多人可能會絞盡腦汁還是想不到最后才被迫放棄。所以"what you want to say"其實并不重要,"what you can say"才是關鍵。

  難以表達清楚的

  有些想法,在交談中,我們用中文簡單幾個字就能夠讓對方明白意思。但是寫作,尤其是雅思寫作則完全不同。評分標準Task Response一項中,對于論據的拓展有著明確的要求,要求考生"present,extend,and support main ideas",避免"over-generalize"。有些觀點拓展起來有難度,或者是過于抽象無法拓展,所以考生們都應該根據實際的情況做出取舍。

  例如剛才的支持父母在老人院生活的理由中,"適應社會發展趨勢",就是比較難解釋清楚的一條,更不用說,可能同樣會遇到詞匯的障礙。

  論證力度較弱的

  后這一條指的是,當支持一方立場有足夠多的論據并且都可以順利表達時,考生應該盡量選擇邏輯性更強,更加直接的論據來寫,而論證效果相對較弱的可以選擇去掉。比如,支持父母在家與子女生活的論據中,"省錢"和"分擔家務",以及支持父母在老人院生活的論據中"適應社會發展趨勢",這幾條實際就是屬于后者力度較弱的論據。因為,畢竟大部分不是為了省錢和做家務而把父母留在家里,也絕不是為了趕時髦而把父母送老人院。

  4、選立場

  其實,如果經過了剛才的思考和篩選的步驟,做決定就是一件簡單且更加有把握的事情了??赡軐τ谶@道題目,多數考生會發現,選擇"父母在老人院生活"作為立場,似乎論據更充分,發揮起來也更容易。當然,這并不意味著,我們要改變自己真實的想法,真的把父母都送老人院,我們只是用"更聰明"的心態寫了一篇作文而已。

  當然,我們的最終目的還有提高寫作速度。我們將剛才選擇的立場--父母在老人院生活--的論據稍作排列如下:

  專業的醫療照顧,避免意外

  子女更加省心

  老人院的同齡人多,有更多交流

  更加豐富的活動

  這時,考生唯一需要做的還剩兩件事,其一,將論據在心中稍作拓展,自然梳理一遍關鍵詞;其二,組織語言,也就是一個連詞成句、句子組段的工作,再稍微注意一下連貫和銜接即可。而這一步,正是考生通過聽老師講解后,自己反復練習,最容易提高熟練度和效率的部分。

  具體的操作,我們可以參考下面的以前兩條論據寫作body段1的示范:

  essional medical care'old people health problem'facility +equipment+ staff' always available'emergency'quickly respond'accident/tragedy avoid

  t children' no need to worry'focus on career

  基本上,整段話的關鍵詞都在這里列舉了出來,剩下的時間,學生幾乎都已在5-8分鐘內寫好一個100字左右的段落出來。

  Most obviously and importantly, aged parents can be well tended in nursing houses. As is known to all, old people usually suffer from the pain of all kinds of diseases or the potential health hazards, while in nursing houses they can receive professional care, with first-class medical facilities equipped and experienced staff always available. Therefore, the possible risks could be minimized and numerous accidents can be avoided, because when emergency happens, nursing houses will definitely respond more promptly than family, who are not likely to be with their aged parents all the time. At the same time, adults don't have to be distracted or worry about their parents, so they can better focus on their career, which benefits the society in some senses。

  通過上述內容,不難看出,有效的審題,不僅可以幫你更好地選擇合適的立場,減小半途而廢的風險,更能夠將寫作過程中構思內容的部分獨立出來,在寫作時,專注的處理語言的組織,將精密復雜的多線程工作分開來完成,效率也就更高了哦。

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